after the arrival part
chosen,
urgent for home and family
while sleeping
the all important subject - their future
She looks disappointed that her redacted poem isn't deeper and more in touch with her inner self, but considering the book we are using is A Romance of the Oregon Trail - we will consider it a success.
Have you ever attempted redactive poetry?
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4 comments:
i'll have to give this a try!! your face is lovely … and your poem isn't bad, considering the source :)
I was trying to figure out whether this was a poem ... ;-) It sounds like fun, have never tried it but will... Love the wild hair and the print all over her face.
A great face. Love her hair.
love the face over the text. looks fab!
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